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It's no masterpiece, but I think it's a bit better than the original version... At least it doesn't start with "The morning sun was shining as I was lying..." Facepalm  You can find the original here: 333blebleble333.tumblr.com/pos… It's also about a thousand words longer than the original. I don't really know how that happened...

Let me know what you think about it. I'm kinda tempted to revisit the other parts as well...
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Incredible start! Pheewww!